IF I HAD ONE!
IF I HAD ONE!
DINKLEBERG!!
Nother Classic By Koit
I dont even deserve to be here.
huehuehue! KeeePPP uhp hte good twerk!
Pro Mlg
1.Needs a Preloader
2.Do lipsyncing
3.Lines need to be much smoother and cleaner
4.Coloring needs work
5.Shading needs a definite source (reason is the darks and lights dont match up)
6. Work on your animation and frame by frame
^ Things for you to improve on. I hope you can understand what i am pointing out for you.
I understand this is your first cartoon, I think it is actually very good and better than a majority of first cartoons.
I know it was very bad and I won't use lack of time as an excuse, I'm am new to newgrounds and animation in general, I promise to make the next one better I see how much I have missed out and thanks for the great feedback!
Oh, god.
Beautiful
Animation was fairly decent, Audio was supurb, and story was meh. Backrounds could do better.
overall it is a pretty good cartoon but the joke and art needs a little work is all.
Thank you! And yeah, I agree, most of that was done quite a while ago so I'm better now I think.
Pivsboyisachicka
i animate and make "art" i guess
Age 26, Male
Animator
New york
Joined on 7/24/11