Wow! Looks really good! Keep up the good work! You must put alot of effort!
Wow! Looks really good! Keep up the good work! You must put alot of effort!
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to leave a nice review on one of my stupid videos. You're awesome!
Bryn.
IF I HAD ONE!
DINKLEBERG!!
1.Needs a Preloader
2.Do lipsyncing
3.Lines need to be much smoother and cleaner
4.Coloring needs work
5.Shading needs a definite source (reason is the darks and lights dont match up)
6. Work on your animation and frame by frame
^ Things for you to improve on. I hope you can understand what i am pointing out for you.
I understand this is your first cartoon, I think it is actually very good and better than a majority of first cartoons.
I know it was very bad and I won't use lack of time as an excuse, I'm am new to newgrounds and animation in general, I promise to make the next one better I see how much I have missed out and thanks for the great feedback!
Animation was fairly decent, Audio was supurb, and story was meh. Backrounds could do better.
overall it is a pretty good cartoon but the joke and art needs a little work is all.
Thank you! And yeah, I agree, most of that was done quite a while ago so I'm better now I think.
Im so scared. So spooky.
i don't know if you being sarcastic or not but thanks i guess?
hUEHUEHUe memes and creepy pastahs are hilarius.
That guy, he scares me.
thanks man okay
Harlem shake fad is over and dead.
I disagree
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am i right
I love sonic its so good
Sonic will should appear if I continue it ;D
i animate and make "art" i guess
Age 26, Male
Animator
New york
Joined on 7/24/11